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PostSubject: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:13 pm

Player ID: Crazyzealot
Character name: Talon Hawke
Race: Dragon/Elf Hybrid
Body Shape: Humanoid
Age: Appears to be in her 20s
Gender: Intersex, female gender.
Height: 6 feet tall
Weight: A bit heavy
Appearance: Tall with a muscular physique. Has long white hair and grey eyes. Rather large breasted, with unnaturally pale skin and pointed ears. Usually wears black lipstick. Has shiny metallic scales along random places on her body, though they can be hidden at will. Has retractable metallic claws instead of nails.
Known Languages: English, Draconic, Elven
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Based off of what show/game/etc: Castlevania, Devil May Cry
Strengths: Her draconic physiology makes her stronger, faster, and gives her the ability to regenerate. Capable of using magic.
Weaknesses: She may be able to regenerate wounds, but she can still be killed.
Other: Bisexual
Character History:
Talon is one of the most recent of the once-famous Hawke line of beast and demon hunters. She was trained since childhood to be a beast hunter, though due to lack of extremely dangerous beasts to take on(and a growing lack of trust from anyone but elves), the once-famous Hawke line faded into obscurity.

Talon travels the world as a wandering mercenary, simply taking any job that comes up. Though if there's a chance to take on a serious threat to the world, she'd definitely take it.

Equipment:
Her armor. The coat below, but with elven armor on the arms, legs, and chest, along with elven metal boots, all enchanted to disappear when she shifts to her dragon form, or just at will.
Her current armor design:
Armor(Edited a bit to match her skin tone):
 

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Abilities/Techniques:
Regeneration
Kinetic blasts
Ice magic
Fire magic - Being born of a Steel dragon, this is her most powerful element next to electricity. She is able to cast much stronger magic of this element.
Electric magic - Being born of a Steel dragon, this is her second most powerful element. She is able to cast much stronger magic of this element.
Telekinesis
Telepathy
Energy shield
Draconic Wings: Is able to sprout metallic wings from her back, with her clothes being made to accommodate this.
Enhanced strength, speed, and jumping capability
Immortality(Ageless)
Doppelganger: Able to project a magic double of herself during combat, usually used for taking on multiple opponents at once. If focused on enough it instead comes out as a massive avatar in the shape of a shining dragon, which requires her full attention, making her unable to fight alongside it. Though this doesn't make her unable to avoid attacks.
Draconic form: Is capable of transforming into a humanoid dragon form, with steel colored scales all across the body, and a large sword. Capable of firing blasts of flame and/or electricity from her mouth in this form, and it strengthens her magic. Lasts up to an hour, though she suffers a huge crash when it wears off depending on how long she keeps it up, with her almost immediately falling unconscious if she lets it go until the last minute.
Darkvision(60 ft): Is able to see up to 60 feet in pure darkness, with everything showing up in shades of grey in this state.
Dragon claws: Is able to turn her hands into clawed appendages at will, whether to slash enemies or even to use her scales as a sort of shield.
Scale armor: Is capable of causing her draconic scales to materialize on her body at will, acting as natural armor.


Weapons:
All her weapons have numerous runes etched along them, allowing them to harm magical/demonic creatures.
A runed longsword known as the void blade, constantly emitting purple(or the color of whatever element it's set to) energy while it's out. This is considered her personal weapon, and as such it is much stronger while used by her. Can be teleported to her at will as long as it's intact.
A runed bow. A collapsible bow that's covered in magic runes, with several magic trick arrows.
Pump action shotgun. Has numerous runes etched along it.
Dual M1911s, holstered on her hips.
An assault rifle


Wasteland storyline equipment:
A leather jacket and pants
A sawed off shotgun with very limited ammo
Several shivs
Goggles(Due to her car not having a windshield)

-Vehicle-
Vehicle Name: Killer Queen
Vehicle Type: Extremely customizable car built off of parts she found in in the wasteland(She keeps it after she escapes the place, though upgrades it a bit further)
Weapon Systems: A rocket launcher(Has to be used by someone sitting at the back)
Attachments: Grappling hook, nitro boosters, armored windows(with the armor able to be moved out of the way for a clearer view), music player. 2 seats, with a bit of space in the open back for more people to sit. Spikes all over to prevent boarders, and blades on the rims. Along with a ramming attachment on the front.


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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Thu Jun 23, 2016 2:50 pm

Updated, with the updated version of her backstory. Plus her armor design.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:50 pm

WIP notes about the dark sigil on her left arm:
It's a sign branded onto the left hands of Hellwatchers, both used as a protection from evil spirits and demons and a way to detect them, burning and bleeding whenever a demonic presence is around. Originally it was actually a symbol used by demon cults to attract evil demons to people for sacrificial purposes, and it still has its attractive properties, which means demons detect them just as well(if not even better) as they detect demons. Which is part of what causes people to absolutely avoid anyone wearing the uniform of a Hellwatcher unless there is already a demon attack.
The protection doesn't actually work as well as they think it does, as demonstrated when the group is possessed when they go into Hell with Talon. Talon is protected due to not crossing the Lawful Evil line as much as her allies do.

Talon's left arm being severed makes her lose the sigil, and the pain of losing an arm being less agonizing than the pain of being in Hell with a brand that causes pain even if a minor demon is around makes her able to focus and win the fight, even when she's heavily wounded and even blinded.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Thu Dec 01, 2016 7:05 pm

Idea: Dropping the original backstory and saying she is part of a fallen kingdom of people descended from demons, with her powers mostly being explained by her demonic nature giving her a stronger connection to magic. I haven't figured out what the race should be called, but I have figured out that the Hellwatchers(considered a division of the opposing kingdom's military) basically took out the kingdom and took in the ones they captured as demon slayers.
Or maybe even Talon is hunted down by them rather than being a member. It'd be more in-line with her Metroid Universe version, with her first entering the hellgate to escape them.
I'll be honest, I had the idea of Talon being badass former royalty by playing Fire Emblem Fates, Final Fantasy XV, and Dishonored 2.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Thu Dec 01, 2016 7:20 pm

Adding to the previous idea: Calling the race The Attuned(or something like that), and them not being demonic but magically infused instead, being strong in magic simply through their lineage. The Hellwatchers would be less magical in this version, considering magic to be a form of demonic heresy.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sat Jun 03, 2017 1:29 am

Added Second Sight and doppleganger abilities, along with an extra detail saying that she's immune to the anti-"evil" effects of her sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sun Jun 04, 2017 2:32 am

Added a new ability inspired by the Necromancer from Diablo II, general necromancy. I also came up with an ability that's probably one of the most violent things I've come up with, where Hawke fires the bones out of a corpse as spiked projectiles.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sun Jun 25, 2017 10:31 pm

I added the ability to stop time and I might remove it from Laelia to compensate. I see more fun uses of it coming out of Hawke than him.

Also the hard rule for it is Prime Evils are immune to it, along with certain overwhelmingly strong demons(such as others that have the ability, or just a "she can't just time stop a boss character" rule). Talon gains the ability by absorbing a Prime Evil soul.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sat Jul 08, 2017 4:26 pm

Idea: Rather than being a Hellwatcher(though she works with them), she is actually from a family of demon hunters herself, loosely based off the Belmont clan from Castlevania. The thing with the brand would be a Hawke mark instead, and the Hellwatchers would be an order that explicitly hates magic, considering it to be connected to demons.
The Hellwatchers would absorb the souls of demons through crystals attached to holy blades.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Fri Aug 04, 2017 12:01 am

I think I'll change her to using magic, I really see no point to her being psionic in this setting, since she has probably the most magical possible bloodline ever.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:53 pm

Added Emperor Soul. I'm not using the necromancy idea anymore but I still love summoning.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sun Oct 08, 2017 4:30 am

I'm gonna try to focus the Hawkes a little more. Instead of being a random assortment of races, I'm focusing it down to dragons, like the Hawkes frequently pair up with a wide assortment of dragons, with the powers coming from the specific dragon bloodtype that's dominant in the person. Oddly enough, being a direct child of the dragon doesn't guarantee that they'll be that color of dragon.

Talon Hawke would have Platinum Dragon blood, which one of the ones that allows power copying along with time manipulation. The fire ones would be red, blue lightning, white ice, shadow darkness(Felix Hawke), etc. The people who have magical powers would all be descended from dragons in their universe.

Laelia is also descended from dragons but his universe has different rules for magic.


On another note, I'm thinking of making the setting be a usual medieval high fantasy setting, at least at the start. The demon gate opens centuries later during modern times. This lets me do pretty much anything I want with the characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Sun Oct 08, 2017 4:35 am

I'm also removing the whole weapon summoning aspect, at least from Talon. Every Hawke does have their own weapon, but they have to learn to store it in a pocket dimension from somewhere other than just having it from the start.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Fri Oct 13, 2017 6:46 am

I dropped the power copying concept. It felt too...superhero-y. Instead ending up a platinum drakeblood leads to her having time manipulation abilities, once she trains them of course.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, the Steel Dragon   Today at 5:33 am

I dropped the idea of her being a platinum dragon, instead being a steel dragon. I can't find anything on a steel dragon's elements, so I just went with electricity and flame. Dropped time stop altogether because honestly it's a broken power.
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